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Artist's Comments
I can't stop fiddling, so I'm gonna call it finished for now.
I may come back in a few days, with fresh eyes. I'm quite pleased with it. It is my first proper Digital Animal. WIP 01 [link] |
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The fur direction looks a little strange around the right eye. The left eye looks good, but the right side, especially in the region 1/2 way to the ear, shows the fur moving in directions that it doesn't naturally grow. If you meant to have it look wind-blown, the texture is quite a bit different.
[link] is a stock image of a wolf that shows good detail on the fur of the face.
On the ears, the left again is closer to real life. If the ear is at all angled toward the viewer, you should see a dark center surrounded by fluffy fur to the inside and shorter fur on the outside. ("inside" being the side of the ear toward the middle of the wolf's head) On the right ear you put in a little too much fur detail. Fuzzier fur will give the impression of the soft, down-like fur that protects the ears.
There are many other details I could point out, so if you want more feedback, just let me know.
btw, is this supposed to be a wolf, or a dog? It makes a difference on many of the details.
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~BigCats member...
It don't matter, if you don't criticise. It's not obligiatory
I do know which direction the fur grows in.
If you look at my ref: photo, [link] , which is more detailed than your link, you will see that there are some exceptions to the norm. Same applies with the ear.
I'm not even going to answer the wolf/dog question.
I'm glad you found so 'many' faults with this obviously flawed pic.
After seeing the photo, I don't think there is anything I could offer to improve this drawing. The only thing I would suggest is making a link to the reference in the description even though it is one of your own photos.
Beautiful job!
He may just be old. This Zoo is reknowned world wide for its good work with lesser known variants.
Check this out... [link] and this... [link] If you thought the Wolf had weird hair? It's a Barbary Lion. I'd never heard of it before I went here, like so many of the species. It has opened my eyes, even more.
PS: Did you really think that I could do all that, without a ref: photo? And with sooooooooo many faults, hehe.
And yes, I did think you had drawn it without a direct reference. Feel free to stop me if you think I'm giving you too much credit.
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